Haaanah and Serennn i fucking love this. it's actuallllyy amazing wowowowowow. FUCKING WRITE MORE SOON. *subscribes* 8-) i love ittt. :) love youu :D xxxxx
This is interesting. Different from everything I've read, yet I like it. Makes me laugh. =]
You have quite a few spelling errors, though. If you go back and edit the chapters in Microsoft Word, you may get more readers, subscribers, and comments. Just a suggestion. I could be your beta and help you with editing if you'd like. I have the time. If you need anything, just ask.
i likes it, i loves it, i want it , i need it... that last bit sounds kinky but whatever anyway, HI! as you may have noticed, i like your story more pwease? x x x x x x
wooooosh (:
this sis sich a good story han da maaaan
love the ger-z-ness
love you looooooooots x