oh man I love the description of Brian moping around like an old lady with hemorrhoids and it describes him to a tee. I really like this story but I'm a bit worried that she was followed home, as I doubt Brian will want to help her if any dubious characters show up.
This story is freaking awesome. I freaked out when I wanted to read more and it said 'this story does not exist'. I'm glad you re-posted though. Love it, it's amazing :3