Left Behind - Comments

LOVED IT! I'm so so so so excited for it! I can't wait for another!

First off amazing, second off you suck for the Luce thing and thirdly I know this will break your heart and all but the AGT dude lied, he wasn't in the army and he doesn't stutter it was on the news :(

Pshhh..weirdo. Discussing your story to yourself on author's note. Which you should totally stop writing immediately...pshhh...totally....awks....obviously you should keep writing! I am just wondering if her parents will find her, what will happen to her!?
Maybe Carter runs away, away from the drug hooligans, and then maybe she is so far away she doesn't know where to go, and maybe she has enough money for food and goes to eat and maybe her brother finds her, sitting there eating some fries and maybe while she sits and he recalls that familiar face and he introduces himself they demand to know why they ran away from each other! And then maybe the Kookie neighbour in Carter's past claimed to take her to some safe house from hurricanes, but all along she was inside watching them leave and they were going forward to meet her.
And then maybe she finally gets her family, and maybe everythings okay.
Maybe.
:)

Hehe thats my goal :P i just love your story so much that I do't want you to stop updating so I figure commenting is a good way to keep you from stopping :P
OMG WIN did he actually back away when she tried to kiss him? that's hilarious go Bryce! Ummm I dunno but Paris kinda scares me.... But at least Kristen is getting biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiitched at :)
Lol thats what happens when your a selfish bitch thats all i have to say to her haha how do you expect to keep a relationship when your always jellin ? it wont work :P
See this is why you be nice to people and be friendly because than you 'bestfriend' wont leave you crying in a mall after telling you the truth xD LMAO loving the first half of the chapter if you can't see its just really really awesome that someone is finally confronting Kristen also that Bryce has gotten his shit together xD See i dunno but Kristen rubs me the wrong way and I really don't even feel remotely sorry for her and she asked Bryce if their relationship was dead he was just being honest which makes him a good person(ish not really?) i guess :P
NO LUCY BAD LUCY DRUGS ARE BAD VERY VERY VERY BAD stay away from them they will ruinnnnnnn your life :(
cant wait for an update !!!

I l0ved it, I can't wait for another update!

I honestly am too tired to leave a huge comment so i'll just say
I love the update! can't wait to find out what lucy is hiding!
and ill write a huge one out next time

Ok, i'm subscribed and waiting for another chapter. it's KILLING ME! and my prediction? I think Lucy is prostituting herself and has gotten into a bad drug habit. can't wait for more!

loved the chapter:D

I actually really really really DON'T feel bad for Kristen. I mean like yeah there are two sides to every story but in this case its like this... Bryce gets told to jump by his controlling girlfriend and sometimes he says how high? and other times its like screw you. The way its been sounding they havent been the perfect couple in ages and its not all Bryces fault she needs to look in a mirror :P she is F-A-K-E but she thinks she's real I mean the fact she would consider bullying carter proves it like blahh if i was in a relationship like that where i couldnt hold the guys attention I'd dump him and than see what happens xD cause if he comes back he cares if he doesn't.. well than move on xD

CARTER IS TOTALLY A BADASS AND DON'T TAKE SHIT FROM NO ONE! I LOVE LOVE LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE HER! :) and no i didn't have cap locks on i just felt the need to express my love for her :) i get so happy when I see the notification in my inbox for this :D can't wait for an update!
BUT actually I like seeing things from Kristen, I think it's be cool to see one from Lucy too that would be kinda awesome but its your story and I'm excited :)

Lookieeeeeeeee im not the only commenter yayy :D but yeah.. ive made it my mission to comment every time and so i shall :P
I'm actually with Carter on this one.. arguing can be fun as long as its ya know not serious and actually angry annnnnnnnnnnnd so she agrees to the party well I think she should I mean she hasnt had anything her whole life and now its her chance at having a normal life :)
lololol "It can’t be all her, Brycen, so get it together, yea?" okay yeah right its all her :P really really hate her xD
lmao lmao oh the punch xD dont drink the punch you naive child haha shes druuuuunk and i bet its Bryce holding her back can't wait for an update :)

i was glad you updated it thank you <3

AH. I looooove this story. It's got a great plot, a little cheesy but I love it that way. I caaaan not wait until the next update! (:

YAYYYYY! I hope you like writing it! Just forget those stupid people who wont comment cause they are soooo not worth it post cause you want to! yeah.. I feel like a cheerleader... woowwwww. Umm I think that Lucys gotten messed up in some very bad shit either gang related or drug related or even worse some stupid pedophile :O i wanna know who she was with, and i can't wait to figure out what happened
Bryce needs to dump her ass like THERE IS A REASON YOU BREAK UP DUMBASSS
buuut he shall figure it out :) or like Carter either way.. hopefully? I'm excited I can't wait to see what happens next :D
yeah.. i totally log into hotmail see your story update notification and i'm like MUST COMMENT! buuuut thats cool I still really like your story :P

HAII so since no one else will comment because they are duuuumb i shall comment on every chapter from this day forward :D
so now ill go and actuallly read the chapter...
awks..
I WILL BE YOUR MOTIVATION! just please dont stop writing :( don't be like me and never finish a story :P
ignore those dumb ones who will not comment! (until they do :P)
buut oh noes whats happened to Lucy? she was growing on me... wheres Lucy? :(
I love how Carters like no. I will not party with you. Or fuck you. tehe shes awesome
and than the new friends and the come to partyyyyyyy
and i really hate bimbo (Brycens ex (dont feel like remembering her name)) but i think its cute and I'm excited for the next update cause like I love this story and I love your writing style. so yeah...
tis the second novel... my bad :P

WHY DOES NO ONE COMMENT ON THIS STORY :O THAT SHOULD BE A CRIMINAL OFFENSE!

like seriously. I'm a silent reader but no one else comments so I will comment because this story deserves it! So...
Brycen... he doesn't remember her, lawl stupid idiot-__- although she is dressed nicely... i can sense some tension between him and the dad - guy who got his wallet stolen already :P Kirsten is a bitcdh and theyre together for the wrong reasons she gots to go and stay gone :P
Lucy seems to be having issues and i really wanna know what her issues are so im excited can't wait for more :D
Also i really really love Carter and I love how she is actually trying to better her life a bit with school and yeah i just love your story
hence the novel
enjoy :)
can't wait for the next update :D

thanks so much!

Sorry! I thought someone else would have already commented on this is darn good :) i love the idea and the characters and the writing and I can't wait for more :)