Boys & Things - Comments

Oh my Goddddddd this is amazing and clever and funny and cute and heart-wrenching and my god you're doing an AMAZING job at cramming so many emotions into this. My feels are on a rollercoaster. Every character has their own personality and development and even if they're not likeable, they're still well-rounded and that makes it so much more real. EJ is an amazing protagonist and you've written her voice in such an interesting way that builds her character and makes her so relatable. She's smart without being stuck-up about it and she's quirky without it being over-the-top - and I could go on forever about how amazing your character development is but I'm just gonna say that I'm totally subscribing and I cannot wait to see how this all pans out! :)

So... apparently I've never commented on this. Which would make me a silent reader. But I swear it's not on purpose.

ANYWAY I love EJ I love her name, first of all, because I can't say I've heard of an EJ before. She's absolutely hilarious though seriously and I love how everything is going on around her like the whole Kelly and her dad thing (which is a teensy bit weird, and I get EJ's feelings towards that especially with Colin gone, which I need to know more about, legit). And ahhhh Cooper is so cute I can't afdlkahfd and I feel bad that he's kind of still hung up on Kelly and I know EJ's probably going to end up with Tate because of the triangles on the front page but Coooooooooppeeeerrrrr. Coops. Can I have a picture of him pls and thank you. And I am gladly awaiting the next updates which will hopefully be sooner. c:

OH COME ONNNNNN!!!! You just stop writing at the worst time!! I might die if you don't update soon...just sayin.

I NEED MORE OF THIS STORY IT IS SO GODDAMN GOOD.

But then, your parents won't let you because there's only a little. If you really like something, you'll want more of it.
WE WANT MORE, WE WANT MORE.
Like, you really like it, I WANT MORE.

HENRY IS TOO CUTE AND SO IS COOPER UGH I LOVE COOPER
OMFG HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA
OH TATE
OH COOPER
oh EJ, giiiiiiiiiirl you are in a hot mess, and by hot I mean full of hot boys n shit ;)))))))
KELSEY YOU'RE BACK I MISSED YOU AND I LOVE YOU MEEPS

Hey! I just wanted to tell you that I really really love this story. I'm unsure if I've commented before, but in any case I think EJ is hilarious and I'm really interested to see what's up with Tate. I also like how you've portrayed his mental illness (OCD, is it?) because from what I've read/heard it seems really accurate and very unlike what most people think it is.

Anyways, nice going, I hope you update soon. (:

So, I've never read an original fiction on here before, but I saw the article about your story on the homepage and thought it sounded to interesting to not check out. And it did not dissapoint!! I just read all 8 chapters in a sitting and I love your characters and all of their different personalities! I especially love how you have connected all of these parts of EJ's life and problems! anyway, just thought I'd drop and comment and let you know I really like this =)

Ugh...love this.E.J is hilarious and it's so interesting that Tate has this anxiety/OCD thing!

what's tate going to do now omg ej you silly thing you may have ruined any chance of friendship w someone
ugh this story gives me goosebumps

ok EJ I mean as much as I love u you're a bitch man
YOU DON'T FLIP THROUGH AN AMAZINGLY HOT GUY'S (WHO, MIGHT I MENTION, IS YOUR "BOYFRIEND" TO HELP YOU OUT) JOURNAL YO DAT SHIT'S PRIVATE
ugh Tate is just the bee's knees
also: EJ THIS IS NOT THE TIME TO BE THE INDEPENDENT FEMINIST
I MEAN
I am so happy that she's an independent and feminist individual but MAN this girl is incredibly stubborn to help

i
am
so
excited!!

ugh i love this story

I just found this and this is my favorite story I've ever read on this website.

This story is amazing. You're a wonderful writer!

Great update! I love learning more about tate, this really helps bring out a side of him we as readers haven't been exposed to yet. Yay! Can't wait for more.

Soo good (as usual) and thank you SO much for updating again. This story is my favorite thing on Mibba right now, partly because it's funny and partly because it's written so goddamn well. Like, I could see me buying this at Barnes & Noble or some shit

OH MY GOSH AHHHH
THE MOMENT OF TRUTH
well not exactly but TATE HOT DAmn U HOTTY
THAT'S RIGHT YOU DEFENT EJ
ugh let me love u
KELS BB ILYSM

This story is amazing. Probably one of my favorites on here. I think although EJ doesn't always react the way a normal teenage girl would to everything that's going on, you make it very real and believable. I love the way she thinks and acts.

I really like your realistic portrayal of the speed in which people would find out about someone's personal life through the use of social media sites. I thought that was a really nice touch.

Okay, so I've had this story up in my browser since I saw the review for the Magazine, and I finally got around to reading it today. And I'm so glad I did.

EJ is just too funny with her pessimism and incredibly real, blunt way she looks at life. She kind of reminds me of Juno from the movie, and I adore it completely. I found myself laughing out loud more times than I can count while reading, which is a hard thing to get from a reader when the character's life is basically falling apart.

Tate is also a really fun character. I love how he's so charming and flirty, and EJ is trying her hardest not to fall for it. It's just so wonderful. I hope you continue to update this story because I'd really love to read more of it. You definitely have a winning idea here, and it's being executed fabulously.

I love this story so much: )I know you're just fixing the chapters up again but it's nice to re-read it all.
just reminds me how awesome this really is, especially EJ.
and her dog, Henry, who has become the van driver: )