The Hunger Games - Comments

ahh, yeahh they should let you know that, itd be helpful, and thanks, we'll get on that.
And thanks Althera!

Ok, comment swap sent me back here, so I've read through it again cause apparently my confidence boosting comment wasn't enough. Sorry. They should really let you know its 200+ characters. But forreal? I honestly can't find any flaw in your writing. All the dialogue is where it should be, it seems to stick to the plot well so far, and I think Cato sounds fetching. The only thing I have to offer for the public's interest, is that maybe you should have a forestry, hunger game-ish layout? It'd set the mood very well. Keep up what you're doing, cause its great.

It's FANTASTIC! Keep up the great work! :)

Thanks! And thanks for criticing us! It's really appreciated!

This was pretty good. I'm into the Hunger Games, and I love what you've done with your original character. No errors that I can find. Keep up the good work! ^_^

Thanks! We're glad you like it!

Wow, I like how you're taking The Hunger Games and changing it to put a few twists in and your own story of it. Unlike many other stories, I have zero complaints. Your grammar and spelling seem to be just fine, unless I may have missed something, but I don't think I did. I'm excited for this story. It should be getting more attention! :D

really? thanks!

So far, this is awesome. Like really super freaking awesome.