I liked this. I'm surprised that Gee was taken for a year. It's unexpected. I think You're fine with the copying thing. You can only do so much with this genre. I like to know what's wrong with Gee though, so update soon? (:
Mikey and Gerard u r not horrible mates nor horrible Dom or Fertile, stupid Toy scaring poor Gerard like tht what is wrong with u, u could've knocked or something.....Gerard needs to talk to Mikey about how he feeling and the thoughts tht r in his mind and same goes for Mikey, they just need to talk in general and stop having these negative thoughts, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
Awww. I really liked this chapter. Damn toy, why you be scaring my Gee like that?! He's my baby and he doesn't deserve that.. lmao. Sorry, I decided to act like an over obsessed fan for a moment, I normally don't act like that.
Anyways. It's all good, I understand, some times it's hard to find new ideas when it comes to Dom/Fertile stories because it's been used so many times. Trust me, I had a hard time too and all dom/fertile stories have similarities , they are technically the same idea just twisted into their own plot.
I really do like this story, I hope I didn't make you feel upset or anything, that wasn't my intention. You are a really good writer(: And Congrats on all the recs, subs, readers and comments, that's pretty fucking awesome! Feels good doesn't it???
“Hm… Well, I don’t know about you, Gee, but it sounds like they need to be punished, and not like you’re punished.” He winked and turned back to them. I swear, when I read that I made <---- this face.
Okay. I find this story to be interesting. I really do.. But... There is a certain part, the part where Mikey tortures the humans who put Gerard in the hospital.. I've seen that before and I know for a fact the two people who wrote it were the first to come up with the idea. Now, I don't know if you got the idea from that story or not, but it sounded the same, just tweaked a little. Rather than that, the story is really good and I enjoy it. I am looking forward to reading more.
:o I love the current banner so much, it's so adorable! An I'd be interested in learning some of their past. Like how they first got together, kissed, told their parents, etc. But I'm still happy with this (;
love it, tht was a sexy pic and the dress looks really really cute on Gerard....i cant wait for the sexy time in the next chapter cant wait to read more update as soon as u can :)