Oh Well, Whatever, Nevermind. - Comments

I really like this, you really could turn this into a full story, it's awesome.

This is really good, and again you have some talent kid. I have to using Nirvana is amazing. I haven't read anything about Nirvana like this. I think this is amazing, and wow. Nirvana may not be my favorite band in the world, but this is good. Now, I think I have said this before, but I can go on and on about how talented you are. This story is really good, and the layout is really good.

Comment swap (mind, that this is just a feedback):

Layout:
I don't particularly like the layout because it looks so simple but since you put a gif in it instead of a picture, I guess it'll do.

Story:
It seems a bit too cliche for my liking. I'm actually a huge fan of nirvana so when I first saw this I was pretty excited, but, as I read on I don't particularly like it.

Title:
The title is too long and it's not really intriguing to read. Short is good sometimes.

Background:
To be honest, the background creeps me out because there's a floating baby hahhaa.

Overall, I think that this is a good story and I wish you the best of luck with your writing!

I have to say, I laughed quite a bit at the ending. Haha! I'm not one to bash someones story, but there are some mistakes, as the person below said, you mistook 'your' for 'you're'. Other than a few more grammatical errors, I have to say, this story was really good. (Not to sound like a perv or anything) I just really liked how their friendship was described, and the emotions in the beginning when she was leaving...With a little bit more editing, this story could be greater than it is right now.

I don't usually like using 'uh' in a dialog since I think it's kind of weird. It would have been better if it was in a script.

In this sentence 'When I turned eighteen and made the decision that I was going to take off- Kurt was one of the two people I told' You forgot to put a space between the words and the dash. You had the same mistakes after and before that which I later noticed.

Also, in one of the dialogues, you mistook 'your' for 'you're'.

This really has good potential except it's not proofread enough. I suggest you go over this and edit it as many times necessary.

Not gunna lie the gif scared the crap out of me when I first opened it :L ahaha I like it though! :D I love the story it's really well written and I have no complaints :) I've never seen a Nirvana fic and I'm really glad I found this one! :D Ahaha I love Nirvana! :D Good writing keep up the work! :D xx

Alright, so it's taken me 3 days to get back to you on this & I feel really bad. I really love the pictures you used in the layout - especially the gif. It gives it that extra oomf that other layouts don't tend to have!

I really love the way you have this written. It's lovely. I haven't found any mistakes here, which is good. I wish it was longer than this though! Reminds me of tumblr, with the pervyness (;

Oh my god you saint of a woman! This has everything I could want and more in it. Not only are you a fantastic fucking writer, but you are also a perv and I love it! Oh and Kurt Cobain, mmmmmmmmmmm. This was perfect in every aspect and I love you. <3

Comment Swap

wow...that was hot! I never seen a Nirvana Fanfic on here so this would be the first I read. I have to say it got me going! (im a perv, sue me ;P) i loved this oneshot and you should write more!

Forgive me... I suck a feedback.

Hey hey. thanks to comment swap I have found your story. Now as much as O Love Kurt Cobain, I can not read your story, it would just make me cry. seriously I even struggle to read story's about The rev from Avenged sevenfold. so yeah please don't hate me.

I'm sure you story is good, and I love your banner. Keep writing and again, Please don't hate me.

This is really, really good. I like the dialogue and the way you used it. I especially love the details of the story. You didn't skip around or just jump to something brand new. You set a path for everything, and I like that because I was able t keep up with the story. The layout is amazing too, when I saw it it attracted me right to the story. I think you did a good job.

I have to say this is my most favorite Kurt Cobain one shot ever!!

have you thought about making it a full story?
its really nice :)