My Prince Not-So-Charming - Comments

Oh my. I love it. I almost cried it was so sweet.

Kwl

I completely got lost in this story, but in the best of ways. It was so good! I really liked the whole masked man concept and Brian haner jr is like my dream man, so yeah, no complaints there. This was gold. Great job:)

The story was good. Like the idea of the masks.:D

-foREVer<3

this was absolutely adorable, sweet, funny and sexy!

So I got this through comment swap, and even though I'm not really a fan of Avenged Sevenfold, I really liked reading this! I was afraid that when Lillian found out that Syn was Brian that she'd immediately be okay with that... I'm glad that wasn't the case. It made the story more realistic when she got angry and felt hurt over what happened. I like that Lucy was in on it too. It's cute how Brian wanted to show Lillian his true self in an attempt to win her over, even if it meant hiding behind the mask for the night. Anyways, great job with this!

I loved this! There should totally be a sequel that depicts their relationship and such. Also, I loved the layout. It was so pretty. Where do you find your background images? Can you maybe help me with my story layouts?? But I loved this! It was awesome! The masks looked so amazing also. Great one-shot!

Woah, this was long.. but very very enjoyable. I adored the theme of a masquerade ball and I thought the descriptions of detail were adorable throughout. It's very well written and I couldn't find any mistakes with the spelling and grammar, at least not anything too problematic. I'd love to read a sequel to this, to see where the story goes afterwards, but at the same time it is easy to speculate - which I really adore. Great story.

awwww, that was so sweet. it was amazing. i couldn't help but say awww because of everything brian did. i mean seriously how could you not love the guy. i'd love to read what happen after all this though. i really liked it

Wowza this is long! But, it's really really good. :) Hah! It's really nice, it's well written, good grammar and I love the development of the story and you kind of get where it's going after it's over. It's good. :) I really like it. :)

ITs kinda awkward commenting on this as it was meant for someone as a reward... stupid comment swap -_- anyway it was a really nice story and very well written. this is oddly different from every thing else comment swap has made me commen t on....weirddd!

This is a wonderful story! I thought it was really cool that the girls' names were Lillian and Lucy, because I want to name my daughters Lily and Lucy (: I'll be sure to score this ASAP!

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OMG I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This story was amazing! I love the whole masquerade ball theme b/c it reminds me of my prom which was masquerade themed and I had a friend make a mask for me! I've always wanted to go to a masquerade ball so this is just amazing! I love it! The plot was great and I just knew it was Brian! I loved it and I'm sooo happy with it! I love the layout too! Pink's my favorite color so i loved it instantly. It was all so amazing! I loved it and I'm soooo happy i chose this for a prize!
thank you and love you!

You made me cry! No one has ever done that, not even the most romantic story ever! I will read this story over and over again. Brian such a gentleman, and a gorgeous man. Oh god, you seriously made me cry! I wish there were guys like that in real life and not only stories. Tell you a secret....I was thinking of someone when I read this. Beautiful!

No grammar errors, just nothing wrong with this. I love the whole plot, I think you may have inspired me to write something romantic, and I don't write romantic stories. But anyways original, beautifully written, great descriptions, great usage of language... Perfect! A masterpiece!

Song and image very well based on the plot, just 'wow' factor! I'm in love with this and prince charming. It was just so romantic and very, very perfect! Thanks for entering the contest, and a beautiful entry.

absolutely beautiful!
i loved it!:)

This is beautiful! :D I loved it so much! The oneshot was amazingly written, and I just loved the plot of it. Brian was just amazing, even if he did come off as an asshole in the beginning. *Sigh* I want a guy like that. This was just perfect in every way possible and is now one of my favorite oneshots. Amazing job!