I love this, hahaha. Not only for the dirty parts, but just the story behind it is awesome! :3 This was a great idea and you turned it into a story so greatly.
All I have to say is holy CRAP! This was the HOTTEST thing I have read in quite awhile! I mean...just WOW! I absolutely loved it. Now I'm going to go stalk your stories to see if you have anymore slash, hahaha.