Fixed at a Single Moment of Sincerity - Comments

This was a pretty good story.
I love Ben and I love Sierra, and I think I've just found a new shipping... >:D

The only thing is, it was a little fast paced for my liking. And there were a few minor spelling and grammatical errors, but if you read over it once more, they can be easily fixed.

Hey! This story is really good. I like how for once Ben isn't some disgusting pig. I like how you're portraying him. And Sierra, i love her. I haven't heard of her until now, but she seems cool.

Overall, i LOVED this! Subscribing. (: <3 xoxo

EEEEEEEEEE <3 Amazing ^.^

This is perfect<3 update soon

An amazing update! OMG, ugh, I love this story so much. Ben is so adorable! I was freaking out and thinking that Sierra was gonna break up with Ben, but that didn't happen so yay! On another note, is this the end of the story? It'd be a great ending and there's a sense of finality in that chapter. I hope it's not the end though, sequel maybe? Lol

I kind of found this story by accident but it's amazing! I love this pairing and would die of happiness if they happened. Your writing and dialouge flows nicely, but there are some gramatical errors. With dialouge, whenever someone new speaks I believe you're supposed to go to the next line. Anyway, without all the stupid drama these stories usually have it makes this story so much better! Update soon and please continue(: sorry for any terrible spelling, I am on my phone

i fucking love your story!!

Just reread this whole story! I love this pairing(: