This is, quite possibly, the greatest story I have ever read. Wow. This was so amazingly written... I can't believe it doesn't have more comments to it. The love story was just so... real. So heartbreaking too. Alex and Erin went through so much... so many troubles... but I'm glad it worked out for them by the end. :) I have read what you have to the third installment of this, but wanted to leave a comment here because I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed this installment. In fact, if I didn't, I wouldn't have actually checked out the third, because usually I don't really like the new generation type of thing, I find it a bit awkward reading about their kids, but I was like, "Oh my God, this story was amazing!" so I just had to give the third installment a chance. So yeah, you never quite finished it, but if you ever do, I'll be around to read that one. I subscribed. :) I can't believe this doesn't have more comments though, going back to this installment, or even the very first. It started very cliche but you definitely improved with your writing as it continued, very much so. Like this is probably the best improvement I've ever seen with an author, looking at where you started to the end of this one. Just wow. Kudos. And it threw me off a little, since I'm from the U.S., and there were quite a few British slang terms used, but I Googled when necessary. Aha. Also proof that I just loved this story. Because usually I read ones that deal with the characters being from the U.S. But yeah, you are seriously an amazing writer. I really hope you've kept up with it. Just... wow. Like the romance aspect of this is seriously spectacular. Again, while it had its cliche moments, you made up for it with the sincere and honest real moments you had in this... just like wow, I am seriously impressed. And I love how she was a die-hard fan that ended up with him; I've never quite seen it done in the same way, I mean, there have been stories about fans ending up with them, but I've never seen any where they truly remain a die-hard fan like Erin did. That made it all the more interesting to read, and made it very humorous at all of her fan-girling parts. Kudos also to accuracy, showing that you as the author must be a true fan yourself for some of the inside joke stuff. Haha. And I love how Alex still loved her and didn't mind it. :') And again, I will be around if you pick up again with the third installment. Because I would like to see how things end. I have a feeling (if it's anything like the epilogue to the first installment) I know where it's going to go with how Shane and Jasey end up, but yeah, I still would enjoy reading it. :) That would also probably be my only critique for this, the epilogue of the first one throwing me off a bit and then this sequel happening, but I guess that's there for people who just care to read the first installment. :) Seriously so good. I'll probably leave a comment on the third installment just because, as a reminder that I'm here for that too. :)
@ Laurenmjs OMG I can't believe I left you out of the note at the end! I AM SO SO SO SORRY! Sequel may be up tomorrow/thursday, depends how tired I am :')
This is INCREDIBLE! Seriously thank you so much! I only found this a few days ago and I have already read both stories and am in love! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!
Okay I'm lost. I have no idea what is going on with Erin, is she fucking retarded. And what the fuck is Zack thinking. She cheeted on him With Andy... I do like him, but he can be a dick. I would be a better girlfrind for Zack... hiny hint. wink wink. Anyway good chapter and update soon.