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  • FrankJScott

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  • Nanook

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    This is, quite possibly, the greatest story I have ever read. Wow. This was so amazingly written... I can't believe it doesn't have more comments to it.
    The love story was just so... real. So heartbreaking too. Alex and Erin went through so much... so many troubles... but I'm glad it worked out for them by the end. :)
    I have read what you have to the third installment of this, but wanted to leave a comment here because I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed this installment. In fact, if I didn't, I wouldn't have actually checked out the third, because usually I don't really like the new generation type of thing, I find it a bit awkward reading about their kids, but I was like, "Oh my God, this story was amazing!" so I just had to give the third installment a chance.
    So yeah, you never quite finished it, but if you ever do, I'll be around to read that one. I subscribed. :)
    I can't believe this doesn't have more comments though, going back to this installment, or even the very first. It started very cliche but you definitely improved with your writing as it continued, very much so. Like this is probably the best improvement I've ever seen with an author, looking at where you started to the end of this one. Just wow. Kudos.
    And it threw me off a little, since I'm from the U.S., and there were quite a few British slang terms used, but I Googled when necessary. Aha. Also proof that I just loved this story. Because usually I read ones that deal with the characters being from the U.S.
    But yeah, you are seriously an amazing writer. I really hope you've kept up with it. Just... wow. Like the romance aspect of this is seriously spectacular. Again, while it had its cliche moments, you made up for it with the sincere and honest real moments you had in this... just like wow, I am seriously impressed. And I love how she was a die-hard fan that ended up with him; I've never quite seen it done in the same way, I mean, there have been stories about fans ending up with them, but I've never seen any where they truly remain a die-hard fan like Erin did. That made it all the more interesting to read, and made it very humorous at all of her fan-girling parts. Kudos also to accuracy, showing that you as the author must be a true fan yourself for some of the inside joke stuff. Haha. And I love how Alex still loved her and didn't mind it. :')
    And again, I will be around if you pick up again with the third installment. Because I would like to see how things end. I have a feeling (if it's anything like the epilogue to the first installment) I know where it's going to go with how Shane and Jasey end up, but yeah, I still would enjoy reading it. :)
    That would also probably be my only critique for this, the epilogue of the first one throwing me off a bit and then this sequel happening, but I guess that's there for people who just care to read the first installment. :)
    Seriously so good. I'll probably leave a comment on the third installment just because, as a reminder that I'm here for that too. :)
    December 20th, 2015 at 12:50pm
  • GaskarthsBell94

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    @ Laurenmjs
    OMG I can't believe I left you out of the note at the end! I AM SO SO SO SORRY! Sequel may be up tomorrow/thursday, depends how tired I am :')
    March 20th, 2013 at 02:04am
  • Laurenmjs

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    PERFECTION! Thank you!!!!!!!!
    March 20th, 2013 at 01:39am
  • sierraye

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    Hey you're welcome! But im not writer, i only made an account to read some stories :) anyway, i love this chapter! Cant wait for more :)
    March 19th, 2013 at 07:12am
  • Laurenmjs

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    This is INCREDIBLE! Seriously thank you so much! I only found this a few days ago and I have already read both stories and am in love! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!
    March 19th, 2013 at 03:14am
  • sierraye

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    Yay you have no idea how happy i am right now, THANKYOU for finally updating again!!! Please update soon! <3
    March 17th, 2013 at 03:38pm
  • whenwefirstmet

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    OH MY GOD WHAT HAPPENS UPDATE PLEASE
    January 10th, 2013 at 02:06am
  • whenwefirstmet

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    YES

    You've kinda got Halsey talking as advanced as a 3 year old two year olds can only say like 3 or 4 word sentences you know
    January 9th, 2013 at 09:35am
  • heeytara

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    When's she gonna wake up?
    September 14th, 2012 at 07:13pm
  • GaskarthsBell94

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    @ whenwefirstmet
    Thank you! Very Happy i have planned a threequel of the kids too Very Happy
    August 30th, 2012 at 09:27pm
  • whenwefirstmet

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    MORE OH MY GOD
    and you should do a threequel of the kids when they're a few years older like in grade school you know i think that would be fantastic
    August 30th, 2012 at 06:59am
  • dizzyyhurricane

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    Love this story any chance of a update?
    August 29th, 2012 at 10:16pm
  • Zaffhi

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    I'm lost on what Erin is hiding. Did she lose one of the babies?
    July 19th, 2012 at 05:12am
  • mosher123

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    Okay I'm lost. I have no idea what is going on with Erin, is she fucking retarded. And what the fuck is Zack thinking. She cheeted on him With Andy... I do like him, but he can be a dick. I would be a better girlfrind for Zack... hiny hint. wink wink. Anyway good chapter and update soon.
    July 13th, 2012 at 08:41pm
  • heeytara

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    I love this
    June 27th, 2012 at 04:54am
  • heeytara

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    I almost wanna get fuck regrets and lets burn this city down on my wrist
    May 21st, 2012 at 06:55am
  • heeytara

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    Intense
    May 18th, 2012 at 02:26am
  • heeytara

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    That was cute what happened at the end
    May 16th, 2012 at 06:37pm
  • MibbaFuckingSucks

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    can't wait until the next chapter :)
    May 16th, 2012 at 04:37am