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OMIGOD It is brilliant. Like perfect. I feel so sorry for Andy. It's amazing <3

IT'S SO FUCKING CUTE I COULD DIEE ;-; <3

This isn't a pairing that I am a particularly big fan of, so I don't really know what possessed me to read it, but I am so pleased I did. The emotions were portrayed so clearly I could almost feel them myself, all of Ben's doubts and passions were so strong.

Although the story is made of something as simple as getting Andy to eat and wash, it was unbelievably gripping and I couldn't stop reading once I'd started.

Well done, I love this :)
Jen xx

To start off, I have to admit that I am not familiar with this fandom, which I normally wouldn’t have a problem with, but I feel like it hindered me here because you didn’t really provide enough description as far as the characters go for me to be able to visualize them in my head, and to me as a reader, that’s important. However, I did find your description and expression of the emotions that weighed heavily throughout the piece to be spot-on, and I also felt like you did an amazing job portraying the relationship between Ben and Andy, I just wish that that description would’ve carried over to the characters as individuals because not everyone knows who these people are and are able to form a mental image and impression of them in the drop of a hat.

The only concrit I have to offer is that, though I applaud the way that you’ve handled the emotions involved with an eating disorder, I found that the way it was presented wasn’t really factual. Anorexia does not present itself the same way in males as it does in females, and while I feel like your presentation of the illness would’ve been great if the main character was female, it isn’t, so I feel like it would be that much better if you put in some research and adjusted the fic accordingly.

That was the cutest thing I have read in a long time! I have officially fallen in love with this pairing!

This story was so precious <3 I love it so much <3 I love all the emotions you wrote into it and I love how innocent the intimacy they shared was :) I didn't see any typos o.o It was great :)

OMG this was too cute I loved it ^-^

This is soo amazing!!!

<3 That was so cute! Ben's so sweet!

This is so well written :'3
I really like it.
I would've never thought of a pairing of Ben Bruce and Andrew Biersack, but it was amazing :3