Just You - Comments

Ouch Jensen why do you have to be so mean? No one believes her when she said she was not jealous hello? Even if she didn't like him in that way here is still jealousy how his life turned out to be so grand and hers so shitty. Newsflash for Angel, she only gets what she puts into it and so far she has been doing a shitty job at keeping herself afloat or making herself happy. She's down in the dumps so much and to actually go home with a familiar face like Brent is a big no no. Will she ever learn? I kind of hope she doesnt for a little longer I like how raw she is.

F*CK YEAH, JENSEN! You tell her!
OMG! NO! JENSEN DON'T SAY THOSE THINGS!
Gah! Angel, don't be stupid. No, no, no, no!!!

She better not go home with Brent! I will be mad as well!
I hope your family member gets better, though!

Loved the update! :D
OMG, no! Anjilika(character AND writer :P)... WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!
She can't trust Brent! What in the world is she thinking?!
Tsk tsk... I don't really know what else to say. But she was right. This won't turn out good.
'Dun dun dun... DUN!' XD I laughed at that. You're the first person I know that's put an extra 'dun'. XD
I can't wait to see what happens next! Jensen better get in there and beat the crap out of Brent, or something. lol. Angel needs protection!
Can't wait for more!

This is a great story and I absolutely love how Angel is, coming to her senses on her love for Jensen so soon and going through the jealousy in waves and watching him being with another woman. I appluad you for not making Danneel a bitch because that is what almost every writer would do just to make things easier to break them up and have the other two characters have their way. As for Jensen andd Angel kissing, I'm glad that he didn't instantly fall for her and decided to take things for the worst. He's a better sense of a man and decided to spend less time with her which seems like the right thing to do. I love your story and became so addicted after the first few chapters, you got me hooked and pity that there aren't a lot of Jensen stories on here that I actually love haha can't wait for the next update

OMG. What's going to happen? What is she doing? I thought she was going to seduce Jensen, but I was wrong. xD

I don't like this! I have a feeling things aren't going to go so well.

hahaha update update update!

Brent again! Oh no! It is a bad idea. I'm on the edge of my seat!

Finally, we have an update!! Brent sounds sweet - so far. Lets see what he turns out to be.

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!! Oh, Jensen and Angel would be so perfect together! there just so adorable!

Loved the update! :D
Wow, superficial bridal store, much? That seemed a little too much just to make decisions on dresses. I mean, really. With the way that was described... the whole wedding reception could've been held there!
But, hey, if it's what Danneel wants...
lol. My favorite part was at the end:
'“No problem Jelly Belly.” I looked up at him wide-eyed.

“You shut your mouth, you shut it right now.”'
XD Aww... teasing. And back-talk. lol. So funny. XD
Great job with the update! Can't wait for more! :D

Oh, wow. I don't blame Angel for feeling awkward. I probably wouldn't have had the balls to even go in. lol

Wonderful update!

So, I'm not the only person who feels out of place in those snooty shops?
I think my favorite bit of the story has been the uncomfortable awkward moments. The weirdness with her and Jensen and how she doesn't have what they have, because her life is different.

I think the only thing I don't like is that the updates are short, but I can deal with that. I really can't wait to see how things play out in this story. I enjoyed the update and look forward to the next!

Yay, an update! Sorry for a bit of a delay in commenting. I have seriously been busy, and believe me when I say this because I love this story and seriously wouldn't put it off purposefully. lol.
But anyway, great job with the update! :D Aww... this is kind of hard, because it's like, you're not sure whether to like Danneel or not. XD Because she's sweet with being there for Anjilika, but then again... I'm also rooting for Anjilika and Jensen. So this is kind of hard... XD Way to make it difficult! You had to make her sweet! :P
She seems so sweet in real life too. :)
I'm glad that Anjilika is settling and working toward a steady new life. She deserves it, she's made a lot of progress. :)
Loved the update! Can't wait for more! :DD

wow, your*

Eh. It's...mediocre.

JUST KIDDING. I love you and you're writing skillz are amazazing.

Awww! Daneel seems so sweet! Why does she have to be so nice!? It'd be easier if she wasn't! Grrr!

Anyways, I loved how you had it that she didn't have a lot of money and had to pint that out to Mikayla and Daneele. Very awesome.

I enjoy the realistic bits of chapter 12: Family and Jealousy. She's not in the world of money and fame. She's a regular person living from paycheck to paycheck. That's real.
The feeling of regret and jealousy in her stomach makes me yearn for the next chapter.