I Could Never Pretend - Comments

Oh dear, Phil didn't say that Bam had to behave at the wedding, just that he had to go. I'm assuming the wedding could be a bit of an epic :S Got me on the edge of my seat again as usual, I'm really enjoying your style, and the dream sucked me right in. Looking forward to more! :D A xxx

Oh boy! Oh boy! Oh boy! Well, I'm hoping there's no knock down, drag out at the wedding ;) Great update as always :)

So glad to see another great update from you :) I can't wait to see what you do with Phil and Ape moving in with Bam :)

I was so excited to see an update :) :) Awesome job as always, my dear :)

I've been away for three days and coming back to two chapters has made a very shit week all the more better. :) It just keeps growing and getting better everytime you post, thank you for sharing A xxx

Awwww Baaaam. Why can't I hate him more? I mean, let's face it he's been a dick to her! It's just the way you write the little insightful moments into the character you created, like the subtle untouched bedroom thing. It's not easy to create a character where you don't simple love and hate them, but genuinely get confused by the emotional reaction you have to their 'inner' moments. And can I just say, GEDDON RYAN. Get in there, son. :P Excited for more, keep up the excellent writing :) A xxx

YAY!!! I was so excited to see this! I can't believe I haven't read it sooner, but I'm glad I didn't because I didn't have an excruciating wait for all six chapters so far. :P THANK YOU this has literally made my week! Can't wait to see what twists and turns you've got in store and your writing just gets better and better :D Looking forward to more, A xxx

Awww, how sweet! I thought the end of the chapter was just adorable! Keep up the great work, doll :)

All four chapters were great! I especially liked the paint ball fight, I was cracking up :) I'm so glad you posted this. I was waiting for it :)