Keep Me Close - Comments

Awe, poor Jimmy broke down. :( I'm so glad that she was there for him, and spoke. Hopefully she can start to come out of her shell now! :)

Wow. This is really great! Your writing is terrific! Seriously! Like, your words are so tender and careful, sort of, haha! :) yet, you don't write it simple, and it holds mysterious bits to it. And I just want to keep on reading to find out everything. And I love the layout; it suits the story! It's dark, but warm - and it also makes it easy to read, heha :) (weird comment much? Oh well)
Looking forward to the next update! : D

Poor, poor Jim Jam
nightmares are so horrible
i feel so bad for both of them :/

Holy shit. Mind blown at this concept. You write beautifully, and I would love to see where this ends up. I'm sticking around for the long haul. (:

AFJGHFTVFRJGT!!!
I love this!!!
Great idea!!!
I can't stop using exclamation marks!!!
The first chapter was so good, really cleverly written!!!!
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