Honesty - Comments

Well I'll let you know right now you immediately caught my attention after the first chapter and encouraged me to keep reading which is somewhat of a rarity, haha. You definitely have a way with words, describing things, like for example, the ballgown, is just so vivid, it's superb. If anything, your chapters are maybe a little too short? But that's a bit of a preference I guess. Keep up the great work!

I loved your layout and I think this is beautifully written. I do wish you're chapters were longer though because just as I get into your chapter it cuts off.

Really well done though, I love the concept but I would suggest having a summary on the first page because that can often make a person continue to read or not. You are talented, so continue to shine. Sadie J. Blue xxx

Nothing seems very honest about this. Jack Daniels and coke doesn't equal honesty. Also, the chapters are way too short.

I'm glad to have come across your story because I like it; it's different. I think it's well-written and I like how you've separated your chapters. I also like how you switched between first and third point-of-view throughout the story so far. I'm looking forward to reading the rest.

this is really good. it really had me hooked in, and straight away from the short summary i was interested. i really like the split narrative between first person and third person, it gives the story something nice and different. keep up the good work.