I love this!! Please write another one (maybe about Jaime being that sexy f*cker) when you finish this one, and yes I have a huge crush on Jaime! This is amazing, keep up the good work!
I just died oh my god this chapter (and story overall) is so good, I love how supportive Tony is of Paloma and how they're all holding out on Jaime coming round eventually and just how Paloma is without the support of the people she loves and this is literally my favourite story in progress and this is the longest run on sentence I have ever written and I just thought I should share my appreciation with you and okay I'll be leaving now.
I don't think I will ever be emotionally stable after this. I mean. I could feel Pally's fear, and Jaime's just pain at losing his only family. I think I have an idea for what's gonna happen next, it's only a theory though. I started crying when they were driving away from Jaime's place. That connection is very real for me. I've never actually had people walk out on me or leave me but I've never met my actual parents and just today was the first time I'd ever seen a photo of them. So the whole "No family" connection really hit home with me. It's beautiful how you've captured it so perfectly.