Lie to Me - Comments

full story!! im anxious to see what harry's hiding. :)

Full story, it's already great :)

This would make for an awesome story! I like it a lot :)

Hello,

This is for comment swap.

I may as well begin by stating that I am not a big fan of the layout. Something about it does not fit. But then again it may just in fact be me. The first chapter itself seemed as if you were rushing it. Maybe slowing down and putting in more detail and what not would make it extraordinary. Aside that I really enjoyed this. Good luck.

full story! its really good so far

i like how its started! i want to see what happens to April and Harry! Please keep :)

WHOLE STORY BBY. This is amazing.

No offense but this is in the wrong section. Its not original fiction, its fan fiction

I think it should be a story :)