Fall Down - Comments

So good

Crying like a deranged walrus. This was wonderful, darling. Nothing more to be said. <3

Crying like a deranged walrus. This was wonderful, darling. Nothing more to be said. <3

I liked your story. All the flashbacks were a good way to tell her story, it was interesting. Her husband bringing her to Heaven was cute. I mean it probably should be a bit sad, but I thought it was super cute. Oh, and I loved the way he had her move in with him. That was adorbs!