The Oldest Son - Comments

Aw, Dean is such a loving brother! this chapter was pretty sweet seeing as Dean was trying to find a bright side to look forward to for Sam's sake :3

I've never seen a fanfic like this! I love it! c: Espeically since they are children and not the rough men everyone loves.

For doing all this on your phone, it looks great! :D

I think you've got the brothers roles pretty good, Sam wanting to be normal, Dean wanting to be that brother that would never let any harm come his younger brothers way. It's really good :]

I hope you update it soon :D

Soooo I'm supposed to be doing my quiz right now (I'm on ques. 14 btw) but reading fan fics is just so much funner. Until my tutor catches me. But whatever.

I like this. I like the way you've portrayed Dean the way you are - an older brother with a streak for being overprotective and crazy cute with his silly goofy affectionate displays (I bet you can't tell that Dean and I are going to get married tomorrow, huh? I rock this whole subtleness thing. Totally.)

Anywho.

I'm going to subscribe and I hope you continue. Or upate. Soon-ish. But no so soon because I have to finish my quiz to finish. But still ... yeah.

Great job on this :)