Alpha...Female? - Comments

Hello there. :) Well let's get started, shall we? I was brought here from comment swap. First of all I like tge title of your story because all of us have read stories with a male as an alpha but you used a female for an alpha. You get bonus points for that. XD You should write a sort of summary, 8-15 lines at least. Other than that, I liked everyting. Even that name you used, (Tyaler was it or something like that?) it made the difference. I like your writing style and the characters you created. You did a good job writing this. Keep it up. XD

Yo yo yo whats up in your his house?! And that ladies and gentlemen was my version of being gangster...*bows* I know thank you thank you....but now what the heck did she do to those people?! Not that just staring at somebody and saying stuff and them obeying isn't really kick ass but I want to know... >:)~

AHH! She attackeded him. She must feel sooo bad. I hope he'll be alright. I can't wait to read more. :D Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sorry my computer was spazzing so as i was saying i give you a jiggly puff and it changes colors and if you forget to feed it then it dies and comes back to lief!!!!!! :)

Omg! I like that name.....Tyalor.....or was it spelled differently? Sorry if it was im not good with names...oh and thanks! Ok so like imangian a chipmunck with a kick ass ninja mask with tiny numchucks and a sword.....omg that is so cute! I give yiou

lolz! wonder who it was! He (if it is a he) better be hot or I will come to your house in the middle of the night and sneak through your window like the chipmunk ninja I am and force you to make him hot....I'm dead serious about this......hahahahah jkjk....I loved this chapter and thanks for the fast update....and I'm now rambling...so to end my long ass paragraph.....blah blah blah blah pancakes blah blah blah with unicorns farts on them...blah blah...

The last bit had me rolling. Hilarious. I just can't wait to read more. I love this story. Updates!!? :D

hahahaha......what she do? I want to know I want to know!!!! hahahah I still can't belive she walked into the boy's bathroom and took he weed....good for her! LOL! thanks for the comment!! I love them! :) Cookies for updating so fast! they have unicorns and skittles on them....

She takes charge. Haha. I can't wait to read more though. :D Its got a good plot and Idea going for it, so good that I am even subscribing. Update soon please!!!!

hey this is pretty good stuff! It's like shes more different then the others and whats her new power? I can't wait for something to happen! :) update soon plz!