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  • Gone;;;;

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    Awesome!^^ Glad I was home to read this ahaxD <3
    April 28th, 2012 at 11:03pm
  • Manbear-n'-Me!

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    Now that I read the second chapter, I gotta say, I'm really curious about the angel and demon dynamic.
    They're the sworn-by-nature enemies, but it's cool how it is completely original to your story. I'm really liking it so far...I smell fight scene??? XD
    And Shin...what's his angle? Why would he lie to Guro? hmmm...curiouser-curiouser...

    Oh, and just one tincy-wincy spell error.
    “Um, I-I think I can mangae,” = manage

    Sweet! I think it would totally make a good anime/manga! =D
    April 27th, 2012 at 09:53pm
  • Manbear-n'-Me!

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    Hmmm...this is different; I like it. =)

    I only read the first chapter though; and I already like the punk attitude of Guro. I also wanna say that I could totally picture this story being an anime; that would be so awesome. XD

    Well, keep up the good work! =D
    April 27th, 2012 at 05:05am
  • DevilRebel62

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    Seems interesting ! Post soon :D
    April 23rd, 2012 at 10:31pm
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