Tristis Nox - Comments

It's cool. I'm glad you liked how I ended it, I planned it to end roughly that way. The sequel will be put up probably at a slower rate since I haven't really started it and I'm going to be wicked busy with last minute assignments and finals >.< But it will be up eventually and I'll do my best to update.

Hahaha thanks :p. and I'm sad that the story is over and everyone died, but that was a sweet ending where she thanked Vay and gets to go home :). I can't wait for a sequel! And I'm sorry if there's like typos and stuff. I'm writing from my phone :p

Not gunna lie... love your reaction.

alkjsdhfakj fdbgyelnkfjd mvhefgjklhf. Just. No. Nonononononononon!

AWWWW! Saying goodbye is always a sad thing.

Yeah, I can feel it. I just have this feeling that something bad is going to happen soon (other than her destroying the world, if she does). I'm not sure it it's true, but that's just what I think. And I think I'd think of myself as the bad guy too if I was her!

Same here, it'd tear me apart if I had to do that. Things sure are getting dark now.

She has to go back to the capital, right? And I know it'll hurt her less, but I don't know how she can willingly make people hate her. I would hate to make people angry at me, especially if I had to do something that was already against my personal wishes.

I think you should! It probably could get published.

I'm glad my story started off your ^_^ I can't stress how happy it makes me to know you like it so much hehe. As for Anita, I know what you mean. She'll live with that regret if something happens during their time apart.
It's just a weird feeling after putting so much time and effort and then going "Oh I'm done..." I'm gunna send it to my friend so she can read it. She's the one to first start reading it waaay back junior year of hs when it was still in a notebook. Man time flies! She's trying to push me to publish it haha

I totally understand. I was super sad when I finished the only story on here I have actually finished (It's only one of two I've finished total, not including short stories).

Oh, and an update of this story is a perfect way to start the day by the way. I got the e-mail right when I woke up! And I know that Anita's mad at her, but I think it's kind of mean of her to not say goodbye. I guess they'll see each other at the ball, but what if something happened to Tris and she couldn't come? Then Anita would go the rest of her life thinking of how she should have said goodbye.

I wonder >=3 mwahahahaha
And as I said in the author's notes, I'm sad too that it's ending. I've spent about 4 years writing this story and now it's ending. So sad =,( I love these characters

I wonder that too! And I'm so sad that this is coming to an end! Do you think there is going to be a sequel?

Right? I feel like I'd be like that too, first my mission was done and on top of that my friend is pissed at me. I'd want space. And with Carson, although I'm not a fan of him I do enjoy writing him. He's just so much fun because he counters her so well. Wonder how Vay would feel if he ever witnessed the way Carson teases Tris

Their bickering is kind of cute lol, but I'd hate to be her. And I can see how she'd want to leave now that she's done all that she could.

Oh I trust that. I just hope that he'll listen. Me too, but sometimes stuff like that just happens. Maybe in the future they'll make up. And I'm sure it wouldn't be the first time :p. Two updates? Day=made. Hopefully Able will listen to her!

Well, you can trust Tris to do her damnedest to convince Able Carson is bad news. I'm kinda sad that the story has taken the turn that Anita's mad at Tris, I like Anita. haha kinda sad that I feel bad eve though I wrote it XD

He's totally giving himself away just then. I totally see his fascination with war and fighting and stuff and I hope that Able does as well. It sucks that her friendship with Anita won't be the same anymore! Though I guess it could be better for her in the long run because of the whole destroying the world/her dying thing.

I don't blame her for being angry either. I kind of hope that it's Vayyyyy! I love him <3.