I'd Be Another Memory - Comments

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This is really interesting and I love that it has to do with mcr! I seen that it hasn't been updated in a while but that's okay. There was a lot that I did like about this, it was very captivating and kept me wanting more after each chapter! I'd love to see how this would end for future reference!

comment swap! it's a shame this hasn't been updated in a whale because it's really good other than a few errors here and there but yanno who doesn't make thosse hahaha!

Hello! I'm here from the comment swap and I just wanted to say that I think your story is very interesting! I noticed it hasn't been updated in two years, but I assume from the fact that it was entered in the comment swap, you are still an active user.
Anyway! I think the story was very good, save for a few spelling errors and such (like in chapter four, "'Yeah, that's defiantly her best role...,'" defiantly should be definitely, and in chapter 10, "The next few days past slow...," it should me "passed slowly" rather than "past slow"). Other than that, the story was really interesting! I liked the plot twist with Frank a lot, and if you ever decide to pick it back up again, I'd be interested to know how it ends. I don't usually read MCR fic but this was pretty intriguing!

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i totally didnt even realise this was a mcr thingy... OMG. i love it. i was hooked before i knew that now there is no way im missing the next chapters. <3
this is writen fantasticly i love it:)
keep it up x

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Wow, I'm so glad I was brought to this story! You have a very interesting main character and your writing style always leaves me wanting more after every chapter! There was a couple errors regarding "there", "their", and "they're", but other than that it is nearly perfect grammar-wise. Keep it at, and I'll wait for more chapters! :)

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I needed my specs to see that font! I'd make it bigger before people bitch about it. i love reading mcr fanfiction. i think thusis really great, your descriptions were great and painted a picture for me as a reader really well. I personally think the chapters could be longer but other that that I don't think you should change anything. oh and spelling and gramar was fine as far as i can tell. keep going.

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I'm not in to My Chemical Romance but this is pretty good! My favorite line was "
The crisp Jersey air smelled of pollution and sex..." Great description! To be honest, the font was a little hard to read. I would think about changing that. Other than that, don't change a thing!

Not much of a MCR Fan Fiction reader. But that aside, this is a nicely written story with an interesting main character. Your chapters could stand to be a little longer - in my opinion. Otherwise I think you have something with this story. Keep it up. :)

Are you freaking kidding me right now? Why have I not stumbled upon this sooner? I am not that far into it, only at chapter eight, but I am loving it so far! Your writing is very intriguing. Deffff going to subscribe. Update soon!!!!

Well, to start this off, I'm not really into the whole fan-hooks-up-with-bandmember thing. Haha. I'm reading this because of the comment thing that mibba posted. But I think that for the most part you write really well. You could do a bit better at making the sentences and ideas flow into each other more easily, but other than that it's good. I like the description and I think you have some real talent. :)

I love it! I demand u write more chapters sooner than later lol :)

i like it so far.. please update soon

omg totes addicted rn. *_____*
CHAPTER 3 ALREADY o;

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crap

OHMYFUCK.. She knows it's him now. She knows who the mystery guy is..
Shit.
And it's Gerard.

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That's awesome

I love this!
Please Update. :]

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Ahh

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