My Savior - Comments

Please start this up again! I just read it from the beginning and I would just love it if you finished it :)

If you decide to start this story again, I'd have Eric ask about her bruises that he's actually seen on her because it's like he knows, but he's not asking questions so he'd be able to help her, or he saw how freaked out she was about going home, maybe show up or call the police to do a wellness check, and after they see how she's treated, his mom might wanna take her in

oh ok. I saw it in recent updated for some reason

@jamila1990 I wrote this years ago. I actually don't even know where to go with it. so Im not going to be continuing, Im in the process of thinking of a new story and plot line! ideas are appreciated :)

chapter 5*

chapter 5*

I just started Chapter, but is his name Derek or Drake because I've seen both names a few times?

Please update! Btw nice name for main girl ( also my name)

I would run away lol update soon

me & Drake up there ^ Yeah. I hate him! Poor Brooke! & Eric is probably worried sick! That cutie pie :3 Hopefully Brooke turns out to be okay. I can't wait for the next chapter! I like this! Even though I ended up crying a lot 'cause I'm an emotional child

Oh my god. That poor chick. Fuck Drake! And YEAHHHH! Your updating!!

Very, very, very, very good. I read up to the latest update and I can't wait for more. Update soon :)

Poor Brooklynn, Drake dropped dead u fucking asshole along with the dickheads for friends, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

)): Cant wait to see what happens.

love it. this story is awesome- you need to update soon... cant wait!

Update soon

Omg, the gorilla part.. I'm so trying that! Drake ruins everything. Ugh, I can't wait for the next chapter, it's kinda weird when he beats her because I think it's sickening but you detail it very well, I hope she can fight for herself.. one day.

Next time I go to the zoo and see the gorillas, it's on! lol Great chapter

Can't wait*

Can't wait*