Darling, I Just Can't Go On - Comments

Loving this story. I was intrigued within the first few lines. I can actually relate to this story and that keeps me reading. I love the details and the characters are amazing. The realistic nature is my favorite to see in any type writing and I love how you are taking this story. You have a great style and I cant get over the fact that I've been trying to find a good fan fic and I finally found it. I'm excited to keep reading more and I see that you have finished it already, I'll definetly be sitting here on the computer for a while to read this. Gosh I'm excited to jump into this story.

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hi! i just started reading your story, and this is a personal peeve, but i have a lot of trouble reading that orange on black layout :c i know it isn't that way for everyone, but it's really hard on my eyes lol...
anyway! your actual story! you're GREAT with detail! it's really easy to picture the things you're talking about and i love that! some of your sentences run on ( i actually have this problem with my own stories) and it's easy to get lost in them, but i think a lot of that is just your style. i'm going to read on! :)

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I'm just going to come out and say that I saw a few grammatical and spelling errors in the story. When you have the time, I would suggest going through it and giving it a good scrub-over to find them. I know you've got a hefty story here, and they aren't enough to make it distracting from the plot, so no worries if you let 'em be.

I really like how different your characters sound from each other during dialogue. If you didn't have any indicators between each character, you can tell who is who - I noticed this during chapter 2, when she is talking with her father. It's very distinctive, and I like that a lot. It makes the characters seem very developed.

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First off, your details right from the beginning drew me in. I could picture the hallway she was in perfectly. I just read the first chapter, but it seems to be a solid story that you have finished, especially from the comments of previous readers. I think you have a great writing style, just be careful not to overdo it. There was one point where you said she turned the knob to the left to turn the volume down, something along those lines. I would just leave it at "she turned the knob to turn the volume down. Saying she turned it left is a little redundant, since its something everyone does and knows. But other than that, great story!

Wow, I loved this!

I stayed up until 6am just read this all in one go and this is still by far my favorite fic.

I won't lie, I'm so over All Time Low. Am I the only one that misses their old shit? But I digress as this isn't a musical discussion. It's not often I'm captivated by an Alex Gaskarth story since they all tend to be the same, but this wasn't a regular fangirl story and I enjoyed that. I just feel like there could have been more detail because it seems like the dialogue overpowers. But all in all, good job.

Just read all of it and i absolutely love it. Youre writing is really good and i loved how you took it slow. Most fan fics i end up reading it all just happens over a night an BOOM pregnant and a fight an married. But this was more realistic, love it! Gonna start reading the sequel now :)

I've finally caught up with this story! I hate that it took me so long to be able to catch up but I've been NaNoWriMo plotting all this month (just attended a meet and greet for it last night!) Anyway. Very nicely done. I love the writing style, and I love the way it ended. It was actually quite heartbreaking. Very rarely do I ever cry during a story.. or laugh and smile as much as I did reading the whole thing. It was fantastic. Great job!

HA never mind, I read further and figured out the name of the band. All Time Low. Sorry I'm attacking your comment page

k I read chapter 3 and I have just a short comment. I feel like your in my head lol. I swear Andi reminds me so much of me so far its not even funny. I guess I'll see if that continues as the story goes on lol

hey! I'm from comment swap and I want to apologize in the huge delay in commenting on your story. I only read the first 2 chapters so far but after I finish the comment I'm gonna read more because so far I like it a lot. The only problem I have at the moment is I'm not sure what band this is supposed to be about. That's not necessarily your fault, I just don't recognize the picture of the guy in your banner or the names in the story which is my problem not yours lol. So if you could message me back and tell me who the band is that would be greatly appreciated.

Anyway, back to the plot. I love how you introduced the band into the story by having them be the garage band next door. I read a lot of fanfics (in my case usually my chemical romance) and I have yet to see someone use something as simple yet as clever as a garage band. I like how you had Rian and Andi "meet" (I have that in quots cuz technically they already know either, but they're meeting for the first time for the readers.) by Rian driving Andi to school because her car broke down. I've had a similar idea for one of my stories as well but I just never ran with the story.

So, if my comment seemed as ADD to you as it did to me, to make it clear I really like your story so far and I'll continue reading it. If you could get back to me on what band this is that would be nice lol

P.S. if you mentioned the name of the band somewhere in the summary or in the first two chapters and I missed it I apologize for my slow brain lol :)

Actually reread this fic while I've been waiting for another update for the sequel, and chapter 20 is still my favorite chapter. Definitely one of the best fanfictions I've ever read.

This was honestly one of the best fanfictions I've ever read, even though it did take me a few hours to read because I read it in one go. Thank fuck there's a sequel! :)

CRYING SO MUCH:'( OMFG THIS IS SO SAD BUT OMFG THE BEST FANFIC I'VE EVER READ

Wow, I can't believe this is over ;-;

I cant stop crying..

I'm crying. omg this is perfect. this was amazing and i can't wait to read the sequel.

I'm crying. omg this is perfect. this was amazing and i can't wait to read the sequel.

Oh god. I almost couldn't breathe! Thank jesus for the sequel.