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  • Tom Hiddleston

    Tom Hiddleston (250)

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    No offence. It's not correct grammar, layout, or spelling. Here's your prologue, the way it should look...

    I never really understood life. Its confusing in its self. So many losses. So many deaths. This is my story. It probably isn't the best way to meet your future lover, but it's how I met mine. The man of my dreams. At first I felt hatred toward him, but now he is my drug of choice. My heroin. My everything.

    Message me if you want anymore help.
    April 3rd, 2008 at 07:11pm
  • Ms.Chevious

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    YAY!!!! They yelled and broke stuff!!!
    So, where's donald? *sniffs* :(
    March 28th, 2008 at 11:33pm
  • KendraxMarie

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    Ok, Mrs.Trump, update. I think donald will be jealous of pete...=O
    lmao.
    Oh Yeah He sure Will Be :roll: Petes My Baby Boy I Loves Him
    March 28th, 2008 at 11:24pm
  • Ms.Chevious

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    Ok, Mrs.Trump, update. I think donald will be jealous of pete...=O
    lmao.
    March 28th, 2008 at 09:36am
  • Medicine Man

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    Intriguing... update soon?
    March 27th, 2008 at 07:26pm
  • ILYstephanie

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    omg....sounds very interesting. I love it.
    ^_^ Please update! :mrgreen:
    March 27th, 2008 at 02:39am
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