Sorry, Morris. I typed the wrong name in my salutations.
April 26th, 2012 at 03:11am
Hi Balmorhea! I just wanted to tell you that I thought your story was great! I wanted to inform you that near the ending of the story, you typed, "you said your symptoms have been only been showing for a week." You might have wanted it like that but I don't know. Also, about everytime you wrote about being in the hospital, you only said, "in hospital" and I don't know if that's only because we are from different parts of the world or if it was just a typo. I did enjoy your story and I can't wait to read more about Paula's condition. I believe that you are a very good writer and should definately publish this when you're finished!
- Eternal Dreamer
