Loverboy - Comments

@ Samwasherexd
I'm we writing some story's and this is one of them so it won't be for a while. But I hope you stick around. Thanks for the comment.

i cant wait till you update

I like this story. Can't wait for more.

more soon please

Love this :)

Heyyyy my lord my names nana and i would love to take that cheeky chappy that is called Matt :D XX

update soon love this

Oh my god! I need to know what happens next!

I totally want ChewBear. He's adorable c:

Awe, thankyouu! This was really good btw, update soon! Suspense will kill me if I don't know who Pete is :-)

What do you mean maybe not Chris? He's apart of the band to ya know. He's just as perfect as the rest of them.

What?? No way!! You can't leave it like that. Loved it. :)

I'll be Dan's girlfriend. Muahahahahah. This is great, btw! :). Update soon!xoxo.

I'll be Dan's girlfriend. Muahahahahah. This is great, btw! :). Update soon!xoxo.

I'll be Dan's girlfriend. Muahahahahah. This is great, btw! :). Update soon!xoxo.

The thing that you really need to remember is to punctuate. Every chapter in this story is a run-on sentence. The entire chapter is just one sentence because you don't use any periods. That's one major thing that you'll need to remember. It will definitely make it a lot easier to follow. That's all I can really say. Otherwise you've got a nice story going on here!

:) great chapter can't find anything to criticise :) another great and original idea as usual :)

more soon love this

Upfreakingdate soon please love this

more mor emore please