This was really well written. This made me feel sadness throughout it all. That poor pirate had lost his dreams and his plans had failed. He also lost his love and his unborn babies.
This was really good. Different, which is what I like also. No mistakes, very good grammar and punctuation.
This was really well written. This made me feel sadness throughout it all. That poor pirate had lost his dreams and his plans had failed. He also lost his love and his unborn babies.
This was really good. Different, which is what I like also. No mistakes, very good grammar and punctuation.
All in all, excellent. :)