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  • sore thumb;

    sore thumb; (315)

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    WHEN THE HELL DID YOU START WRITING SHERLOCK FIC.

    WHY WAS I NOT TOLD, ALYSSA.
    May 2nd, 2012 at 12:59am
  • mauricewashere

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    karen's evil twin is not aquainted with the modern breed of sherlock

    um
    yeah

    idk what to say about this

    but it made me kinda queasy.

    also, did you fail to notice the fail that moriarty stuck a gun in his mouth before sherlock 'died?'
    i don't believe that he died either, but um... meh.

    this was sexy.

    but really weird.

    i stick with the deliciouslytallandskinnyfloofyhairedacidtonguedmindpalacingworld'sonlyconsultingdetective and his jawn :)
    April 26th, 2012 at 01:18am
  • which-witch

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    HA COMMENT VIRGINITY.

    Anyways, onto more important things. Like comments. I really liked the way you wrote this, and I love Sherlock, so yeah. But there were a few things that kind of put me off. I don't like how the setting is strange. Sherlock is the early 20th century, but there was a sweatshirt? I was confused. And the title of the chapter seemed very...unprofessional, and quite strange. I think this could go a lot farther than just one chapter, though, and I would be willing to read more if you were planning on doing that.
    April 26th, 2012 at 12:01am
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