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  • gothique4

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    well Matt's taking it as well as I thought he would, by completing a complete fuckwad to everyone around him who always knew that he'd fucked up

    damn this phone call is going to be interesting and I can't wait to read more
    April 29th, 2012 at 03:01am
  • Synful Shadows

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    Matt's just a stubborn asshat. >< He just needs to admit he was wrong and beg her to forgive him, instead of acting like a jerk to her. But at least they know it's her kid, even if they were slow figuring it out. And I definitely loved how she told him "I told you" and walked away. Way to go, Grace! I can't wait to see how he reacts in the next chapter! :D Awesome udpate!
    April 28th, 2012 at 03:16am
  • lizicea7x

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    liked the ending of the chapter
    mooooore sooon please
    April 28th, 2012 at 03:10am
  • gothique4

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    that the was the best way to tell him - "I told you" then walking away. I'm proud of her :-)
    How long will it be before Matt's guilt goes into overdrive and he's a blubbering mess - I'm guessing now long and he's gonna spring after her - I hope she slaps him :p
    April 28th, 2012 at 02:42am
  • MaryJane_2013

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    DAMN!!! Matt just got told! lol
    April 28th, 2012 at 02:37am
  • gothique4

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    lol and we all know who the surprise is going to be :-) Matt is still being a dick and he's gonna almost blow his load when he sees her again. I hope she gives him hell :-)
    April 27th, 2012 at 11:12pm
  • Synful Shadows

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    She's the surprise host. That's obvious, but I love it. Matt's still pissing me off. Bullshiting or bot, he still shouldn't be talking about her that way. He's the one that screwed up, and he can't even realize that she had his kid. Dumbass wouldn't listen to her that day when she tried to tell him. But I know that the tension will build between Brian and Matt again when they see her. Update again soon please! :D
    April 27th, 2012 at 09:36pm
  • lovelybones-0

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    So predictable but I love it!! ;) <3
    April 27th, 2012 at 08:29pm
  • Synful Shadows

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    Oh, what's she gonna do? And is it bad I feel slightly sad for Brian even though I don't like him? I guess it's only because I like him a little more than Matt because Brian wouldn't have kicked her out I don't think. I can't wait for more! :D
    April 27th, 2012 at 03:57pm
  • gothique4

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    ooh wow that sly smile can only mean good things a coming - Brian better be ready for what's coming and Matt's gonna cry like a bitch :-)
    April 27th, 2012 at 02:27pm
  • MaryJane_2013

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    Oh Sweet Baby Jesus!!!! I can not believe it!!! I want more!!!!
    April 27th, 2012 at 05:00am
  • babygurl94512

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    i cant wait to read more im still mad matt threw her out
    such a douche
    cant for the update
    April 27th, 2012 at 04:31am
  • Synful Shadows

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    Just saying the little boy in that banner is absolutely adorable! ^.^ About the story, I'm glad Grace got her life together, and that she's independent. She doesn't need a man, and after what she's gone through, she probably wouldn't even trust another man. I also really hate Matt. I still can't believe he kicked her out. What the hell was he thinking? He screwed up big time and I hope he's miserable. Great update! :D I can't wait to to read more!
    April 27th, 2012 at 04:08am
  • gothique4

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    yay update!!!! awww that pic is just so adorable and those dimples could be Matt's.

    I can't believe Matt just threw her out and then never tried to contact her again. Talk about throwing the mother of all hissy fits. Now he's missed out on years in his son's life just because he was being pathetic.

    Wow, I can't wait until they meet up again as Matt is going to get a sledgehammer between the eyes when he sees Blake. As much as they were a cute couple, I hope she gives him hell :-)
    April 27th, 2012 at 03:19am