Second Heartbeat - Comments

awww we know he's sorry but I for one want to see him grovel like there's no tomorrow :p

love this so much update soon like nowish lol

Wow.I just read all of stranger then hurried to read second heartbeat .I just wanna say amazing story for sure.The scenarios seem to be very realistic so that makes your story even more enjoyable.I'm all for Matt.I really liked him in stranger though not so much at the end but I like him now because he is genuinely making an effort here.Yes he still wants to be with Grace but he also wants to be there for Blake too.I know he messed up but I think he deserves a second chance and I'm glad Grace is at least allowing him to be involved with Blake.She is obviously a great mother and I was actually kind of proud when she admitted to Brian she had been selfish keeping Blake from Matt to prove a point.Brian is another thing all together.I haven't been for him in either stranger and now in second heartbeat.I just dont like him at all here.Way too selfish over Grace.Im really hoping she doesn't ever give into Brian at all.I don't think he even has any right to be pissed that Grace would given the choice,choose Matt as Blake's father.Anyway now that I'm done rambling keep up the great work,I defiantly love this story!:D
Can't wait for another update:)

Just read the prequel then this! Great so far. But Brian is really an ass...

I accept he is sorry...and I marry him too if he wants to...hahahah Anyways...you're story is stealing my mind of everything else...love it keep it up :D

If Matt was my baby daddy I would be back on that shit like the plague. Just saying

Blake's so adorable! ^.^ I love how he just went and hugged Matt when Grace told him that Matt was his dad. I also liked that Grace decided to let Matt be a part of Blake's life. I guess I can start to forgive Matt as long as he doesn't do something stupid to screw up again. I know he's sorry, but I still don't like what he did. But I shall let it go, mostly because he's a saint compared to Brian, who is seriously pissing me off again. >< I can't believe he tried to talk Grace out of letting Blake know who his dad was. He needs to gorget about getting back together with her already. Anyway, great update! :D Can't wait for more!

I believe that he's sorry! I think they're the perfect couple. Brian is really starting to piss me off.

love it
bri is so annoying
matt is so cute more soon

I'm so happy that Naomi blew up on Matt because he deserved it for what he did to Grace. He can't jsut expected to waltz back into her life and pick up everything as if nothing happened. I can just picture Brian and Matt fighting over her all over again and they'll all be back to square on. Can't wait to read more as this is going to be one hell of a roller coaster ride

You, my dear, are a very fantastic writer. I just read the prequel to this and fell in love. I cannot wait to see where you take this one. Great job hun!

Matt's so fucking stupid. I'm glad Naomi gave him a piece of her mind, seeing as Grace didn't go off on him like I expected. I just can't feel sorry for him though. But Brian's trying really hard to make a move on Grace again. Asshole. I don't know which guy I dislike more. >< Anyway, amazing update! :D Can't wait for more!

it's Brian of course he has ulterior motives lol. He's still got the hots for her and getting close to her again is revenge against Matt for taking Grace from him

Should've known Brian would get to her first. I just can't help but think that he's just doing what he can to get her back. I mean, that's what he's done before. It wouldn't surprise me if he did have some sort of motive. Matt will be pissed when he finds out. Great update though! :D

HAHAHA I always comment to your story like a dork because... I'M ADDICTED :D...it's so well writen and amazing to read. Please keep it up :D and congratz for your skills :D

Yep Brian is deffintly trying to move in before Matt even has a chance to step up
Wow that's kinda cold
But I like the drama this will cause
Can't wait for more

COOL...Matt should make it up for his bitch atitude...congratz :D

more soon please
please
matt is going to see her what is she going to do

Of course he would act like a dick. But I was glad when Jimmy went off him. Matt needed someone to tell him those things. He just needs to man up and talk to Grace though. I'm sure she'll tell him to fuck off and leave her alone like she should, but I'm curious to see what will happen. Great update! :D

I love this story already! and your banner is so cute...Update soon!