The Beginning - Comments

  • serendipity;

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    You are such a wonderful writer! It's not often I enjoy reading about Kris Letang, but your attention to detail in your writing is fantastic! I would love to see more writing from you someday. Cute
    January 24th, 2014 at 11:09pm
  • bbgordon

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    This is soo beautiful! I had tearss in my eyes at the end. I liked the way you described them both, the attention to detail and especially the end. I would love to read more from you, preferably a whole story, because I really enjoy the way you're writing this :)
    June 20th, 2012 at 09:53pm
  • Amber;

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    This was way too sweet! I loved it, I hope you continue to make stories on here, I would definitely read them :]
    April 30th, 2012 at 02:45am
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    I loved it! You did a great job with this!
    April 27th, 2012 at 02:56am
  • dreamerforever

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    That was wonderful! I love it!
    April 27th, 2012 at 01:49am
  • MK-HabsFan

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    I love it ! Really cute story !! Good job :)
    April 27th, 2012 at 01:21am
  • Ladyfiaran

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    ooh, that was so sweet! I'm a sucker for sappy cute romances and that was adorable, I love the idea of Tanger being a dad. Great job!
    April 26th, 2012 at 10:24pm