You are such a wonderful writer! It's not often I enjoy reading about Kris Letang, but your attention to detail in your writing is fantastic! I would love to see more writing from you someday.
This is soo beautiful! I had tearss in my eyes at the end. I liked the way you described them both, the attention to detail and especially the end. I would love to read more from you, preferably a whole story, because I really enjoy the way you're writing this :)