Better Off This Way - Comments

Ow, Soph.

Wow! your writing is so good! I felt the emotion of this while I was reading it. This would be so devastating! I cant say I would have been able to handle everything as gracefully as Sophie did, I probably would have kicked him in the balls and then lit his shit on fire or something..lol. Poor girl regardless!

Poor Sophie :(
she gave Brian everything just so it ended up like this.

Oh my goodness this was amazing! I never felt the urge to cry so much from a story.
<3 Michele

make it a story please :)

Oh wow... This was amazing. I agree with everyone else... MAKE IT A FULL STORY!!! :)

I love this. Please update soon.

Man this a depressing first chapter. I feel bad for her, but she's being very stronge

i love this! you are a brilliant writer and you come up with the best ideas for stories

Oh noooooo!!! Can you do a 2nd part where he finds her a year later and refuses to leave her alone till they are back together? Please please please? I need this for my soul lol... :-)

OMFG!!!! I love this story sooo freakin much! please please im begging you make this into a story please!!!

Ive read this over and over since the first and I cant get over how amazing this is! Its so deep and it never fails to bring me to tears with all the emotions swirling in it, hands down the best piece ive ever read, I cant wait for the full length!! =)

Aaaaaamazing! Just amazing! You had me in tears as I read it. So heartbreaking, I was crying along with Sophie. *sniffles*
You have to make this into a complete story. Please make it into a full story! Pretty please!

Wow! That was absolutely amazing. I literally cried. Amzing amazing amazing!

Love it! ! Make it a full story please!! I wanna know what happens next!!

I read this at about 4 this morning on my break and didn't have a chance to comment. I'm not even sure how I came across this, but I am so glad that I did. You are such an amazing writer. I felt every emotion she was and was literally tearing up, and had to keep myself from crying in the break room with a handful of other people around lol. I just read it again before commenting and again, wanted to cry. I love this so much. You're so talented! And this might sound weird coming from me, since you have no idea who I am, but if you were to turn this into a full length, I would totally read it to death c:

This story was AMAZING! I felt her pain. Great writing!

I think this was amazing and can't wait for you to make it a story! Looking forward to reading it!

Oh my gosh that was awesomeness!!!! Like I was almost crying at the end. I agree with the above person (hachie). Make this into a full blown story it's soo good. Like I want to know more!!!! I swear, instead of it just being a movie in my head, it was like I was in it. If that doesn't sound weird at all... Yea that probaly did, but it just, you can easily connect. Please make this a story!! It's tooo amazing to be left as it is!!!

~T. Strange~

I begging right now to make this oneshot into a full length story!
When I caught wind of this, I could not resist reading it and distracting me from other things.
The emotions is very sensitive!
Right away a reader can feel the betrayal and hurt that Sophia felt when she found out that her husband of seven years was cheating on her and he decided that he wanted to leave for her for a whore he met at frickering concert for crying out loud!
He picked the whore that he has only known for seven months over Sophie who he has know since they became best friends and then married?????
What hell is he thinking!
I am begging you to start this story soon because I will be dying on anticipation for this oneshot to become a full length story!
Brian will definitely be kicking himself in the ass for choosing a girl over the woman he vowed to love and cherish until death do them part!
The way he tried to make it look like he was looking out for Sophia was complete and utter bullshit!
I hope he suffers the mistake me made and that cunt he choose over Sophia gets an incurable disease and dies!!!!!
This oneshot is amazing, it brought me well up with sorrow!