It feels like I've been waiting for this for forever, and dear god, lets just say it was sure worth it all. I'm so in love with it, I have no words even. It was just all so extremely well written, and you used a great, variably language and... My oh my, I'm trying to sound professionall but I just want to scream because of its perfection. I love you, my Marilyn, as well as I loved being the "swedish blonde". >:) THERE ARE NO WORDSSS
WOW, this.... this was.... GAH! I can't express how wonderful this is! You are a wonderful author. The mood was so dark and taunting, downright realistic. Tim's character seemed so perfectly pin-pointed. VERY GOOD!
Sweet holy jesus christ, I can't even find words right now. I mean... oh my god. This was so well written and so sexy and so omfg. I had to take breaks when I read it because trying to handle all of this awesomeness at once probably would have made my head explode. I love it love it love it ok <3 And omg, I can't get over how wonderfully you wrote Tim's character. It was perfect. And again, I love it. :D