OH MY GATES... this freaks me out but it's because it's so well written. This is so genius. Matt showing up for the first time got me spooked. Amazing story.
August 5th, 2012 at 05:42am
The layout is very very nicely done. I love the cool slash spooky background and the picture, too, is scary with the colour effect. The colours you pick are acceptable to my vision. :D
The story is... I don't know how to put it but to me it was kinda scary at first. I rarely get scared but when I read this, I didn't even have the courage to be alone for a few moments. Especially when the first time her reflection smiled, it was creeping me out.
The first time Matt appeared in the mirror was also frightening when I imagined it. I think it was strange that Matt gave her a flying kiss through the mirror when he could face Angelina in their own world.
Your writing seemed rushed but it still was worth to read because I really like the story. I understand about the missing inspiration, I always do that too.
Anyway, good job. I'm sorry this comment is shorter that I usually submitted because I'm in a hurry. ^^' I will count the marks after the deadline. :D thank you for your cooperation with the contest! I'm glad you didn't drop out x)) <3
