I Hate Everything About You - Comments

Comment Swap!!

This story was one of the best I've ever read on here. I seriously love the idea of it its really great. I liked the back and forth of the narrator. I'm glad you wanted to write this, and I think you should want to write more. Please keep writing like this!

This was a really unique style of writing. I've never seen a story written where the entire story reads as though it is one character talking to another. It was a unique idea, and it held up well throughout the story! I was kind of confused at first because I thought the character was talking to comeone named Gerard, and then you talked about that character wearing a dress and lipstick and I had trouble figuring out if someone was cross dressing or if you just changed who you were talking about. I'm not too sure!

Awh, I loved this so much :)
It was so well-written. I love how descriptive it was... I love this song too :D

~Pansy Xo

(P.S. I got so confused with someone else's comment where it says: 'The way you described her cheating on him was amazing.'

SHE?)

Wow. That was sad, scary, and beautiful all at the same time. Intense, definitely, but it was certainly in a good way. I was really impressed and I like your writing style. This was worth the short little read, I almost wish it was longer, but it was just right. Great job bro :)

ohmygoshilovedthis.

The way you described her cheating on him was amazing.

The way you got into depth and the way you described their every movement.

The way he can't help but give into her, and the way she's so beautiful.

This was awesome!

comment swap;
This is really amazingly written for having no dialogue and purely on describing it like you saw it first hand. That's something a lot of writers have trouble accomplishing and doing it well. You did an excellent job on this and I wish you luck in the rest of your writing! :)

This was fantastic, the way you portrayed Gerard was beautiful, and then all of Frankie's conflicted glory.

I am so happy that your writing again! I know what it's like to have writers block and literally it's like all aspects of your life have turned grey so really, I am happy for you and I hope it stays this way for quite awhile!

Thank you for the lovely comments below also, honestly, I think thats the sweetest thing anyone has willingly done for me on mibba.