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  • slowburnbaby

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    So this is perfect. I saw Francis being exactly lie that in my head and I could hear Babs, Lids, and Darren all talking in my head. Perfection!
    April 27th, 2012 at 06:13am
  • lilbev199

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    I love it! I love it! I love it!
    But you knew that :)
    Ugh, I love the way you wrote it. I can see Francis being that nervous and fidgety and whatnot.
    It's really adorable and I love it!
    April 27th, 2012 at 06:10am
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