It's chapter 20 now, and I'm somewhat disgusted. It's very noble of Trinity to rescue her house elf from the Death Eaters, but HOW FUCKING STUPID can you be?! ALL you have to freaking do is ORDER HER TO DISAPPARATE AWAY. PLAIN. SIMPLE. EASY! ugh.
That was a wonderful epilogue! I could feel the emotions of the characters in my chest! In the last chapter I wasn't sure if you were going to follow the actual HP plot and kill off Fred, but you did. It was bittersweet because I was rooting for Trinity and Draco, but loved how happy Trinity was with Fred. Overall, it was quite the journey through these young peoples lives. You did a fantastic job! Gosh, what am I going to read now...
WHAT IF... the side effect of the love potion was something like if you get pregnant first it's with the first person you had sex with and then the second time is with the second person and that's when the potion wears off? WHAT IF... the twins are fred's kids?!?!!? you can't leave me like this. please make a sequel.
OK Epilogue, but let me support my claim: You said you didn't really have a story ready for a sequel, plus, everything would be revealed in the epilogue anyway. I would rather much just know what happens to everyone tbh. But that's just me.....
*applauds* Encore! Encore! That was great!! I'd love to see a sequel, because I feel that there's too much left hanging here. Draco and Trinity need to hide out from the Death Eaters, Trinity needs to express emotion over Fred's death, Trinity and Draco need to take care of and protect the baby, and I think (this is just my opinion) that Trin's and Draco's relationship is just kind of in an abyss. There's nothing stating where they really stand; especially after this last chapter; they hated each other the whole story, but now he's helping her and she's accepting.