A Damned Saint and an Honorable Villain - Comments

I do love the title, honestly. Though I have to admit that your layout is a bit off putting. Your paragraphs are generally formatted properly. There isn't too many noticeable grammatical errors, but I'd recommend just revising the chapters once or twice to see if you pick anything else up. The plot seems pretty cool.

i just now found this story sooo i think you should add more to it? please? lol

You should pick this up again! I really like it!

This story was REALLY good!
why'd you stop it? :(

I love this one too :)) you're an amazing writer!(:

Awesome story so far. I love the amount of detail you reveal within the story although at times it is a little confusing. I love how you names the chapters in the summary in French numbers!!!! :-D great story and can't wait to read more!

I thought this was a very cute story with an amazing title. There is punctuation that needs to be attended to, and I noticed a few spelling errors. I will make an analogy, my mom's friend was talking about her neighbor and she said he had a dog and he had a frog come out of his mouth. We all thought that it was her neighbor coughed up the frog. The moral of the story is that you need to be very careful with your pronouns. At some points I was not sure who was talking. Other than that I was actually glad to read this.

It's a cute story, seems like a pretty good plot. You have to watch out when you're writing. You're missing a pretty good amount of periods after sentences and every one awhile you have some spelling mistakes. Otherwise, it's pretty good. More detail would help out a lot because when they kissed, I was under the impression that Aiden was still in the room but the he came out of the bathroom. Kind of confusing.. Keep writing though!

Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Firstly, I love the layout :) The summary is very interesting and the story carries that on. The characters are fun and interesting but could use a bit more description. Overall the story could use some more description but has a good plot and well thought out dialogue and actions. Great job :)