Devil in the Details - Comments

@ azul-ultramar most of my stories have been ongoing for a few years, I got commitment issues a mile wide ha. I'm glad you like it, I tend to update these things when people remind me they exist so thank you aha

Just so you know... Your writing is really well structured.

Though I think you lack organization or I don't really know what, because you started this story two years ago and it's so well written, and you have taken time to develop the ideas into the chapters, and most important, you just give me the idea that you already have all the storyline plotted out in your mind but you just haven't being able to put it onto this.

I might be assuming too much but I don't care, it's amazingly cryptic and just plain good. It has been too long since I read something like this and it's pefect, just please, update.

Pease please please, you would make everyone so happy just please.

<3

this is amazing!! :D

We shall drown in information but starve for knowledge.

The fact that this bleeds the truth so simply.

Ryan finds it ironic that the t-shirt she's wearing used to be his, and that is used to be Ryan sharing a bunk with Brendon, and the whole situation is just pulsating with fucking irony.

I don't know why, but this had me smiling like a bitch, because HA! Take that Sarah! And maybe it wasn't all that funny, but my dislike for Sarah really had be laughing.

It didn't, though, so Ryan ruined everything and almost himself till they picked him back up again.

Um... feels on this one.

He's not welcome, here, but he'll cling on because it's all he's got left.

Whoa, why the Jon Walker hate here Ryan?

Ryan doesn't catch his eyes and when Brendon says I like it when you sing , Ryan pretends not to hear.

Okay. Okay. Tearing up here with the feels because Brendon is sickeningly annoying but charming and Ryan's just. Ryan's just there.

Please, for the love of all that is good and holy update this soon before I drive myself insane.

I really love this fic! Please continue and update soon :)

I still love this just so you know. : )

Yayyyyyyyy new chap! So curious about the upcoming events. You write so beautifully.

Awe poor Ryan. 3: update yeah? I need to know what happens to my baby! :D

Love the intro so much!

Good story. c:
Hope you continue. ^^

First commenter YAY.
Anyway it seems like such a decent, great story! I really hope you'll carry on with it! :)