I somehow found this accidentally & I'm glad that I did (; I LIKE the way you write, and since I' a picky reader, I'm glad that I somehow stumbled upon this. I like how you described Luna and the fact that she knows where she went wrong. Please continue this and yes, it might seem tedious but I believe that this is going to turn out well (: Take your time and until then, I'll be waiting (:
Please, please continue this. I've come across many Dave/James Franco stories and none of them have gotten anywhere. This has so much potential. Hell, I love it already. Please don't abandon it. I'm looking forward to unearthing James and Luna's relationship :)
And if it wasn't obvious, I'm definitely subscribing.
This story is very appealing to me. Not only Luna has been with both boys but she cheated on one with the other. Why James is so sentimental when it came to Luna does strike me the wrong way, for some reason I can't see him just crying seeing an ex of his even if she did cheat on him with Dave. The bitterness was right but the crying didn't fit. i think James is more withdrawn in a sense when it comes to emotions like that, i don't think he would let his ex see how truly heart broken he was but that's just me. This is your story and you can portray your characters however you want. I can't wait to see where this goes, if Luna develops feelings for Dave or tries to avoid them all together. James is always the distant one and being piled up in work, that's how he functions and having Dave around who is more chilled back and happy, basically the sun in the family, it's no wonder Luna felt something for him some sort of connection even if it was lust. I can't wait to see how this all plays out