After the End of the World - Comments

Wow, That was amazing!

You're a great writer!

Jojo:

-iz reading eet-

Shit. Shit. Shit.

The whole story's amazing. But I love the last part most, when everything's hopeless and when he remembered what they said to each other. Part:

‘I’m not okay, Gee,” he gazed up at his big brother with the saddest eyes in the world. ‘I’m not.’

Gerard’s breath hitched as Mikey lost his.

‘Thanks, for helping me out. You’re the best,’ with the ghost of a smile on his face.

Gerard stopped thrashing violently, becoming still as his brother lay, so close yet so far away from him.

‘I mean it. I dunno what I’ll do without you,’ so innocent, so earnest, so heartbreaking.

Gerard’s eyes were too dry to summon tears, but he felt like crying anyway.

‘But when that happens, you have to take care of yourself out there, okay? Promise?’

‘Promise.’

It made my eyes water. Fortunately, not a tear fell down from my eyes. :con:

Is this your first MCR fanfic, ate?
Tis amazing. I could feel the emotion in your writing.
And the sadness dropping in every word. [/is being cheesy]

I love it.

Screw being inactive for more than 30 days! This is amazing you can really feel the grief Gerard's feeling from loosing his brother...

I'ma bit sad now...

Wow, that was really sad. I like how you had the recurring lines in there; it really brought it together well.

You leave much better comments than I do. I'm having the most impossible time thinking of what to say...as I often do. Just know that I loved it and it makes me sad, but it's somewhat heartwarming at the same time. You show the relationship between Gee and Mikey very well. *applauds*

Seriously that was beautiful.
The emotions, and the flashbacks at the end just made everything seem so much more human. And you can see that in the video too.
It was like you took the thoughts right out of his head and wrote them down.
Absolutely fucking awesome.
(Excuse my language :tehe:)
I really love it.
Can't fault it.

I am so slow in this but I just found out about this story and when I read it...
No word could explain how I am feeling write now.
its just really truly amazing. I may sound like the other 15 before me but thats the truth. You are one writer I would look out for in the future.
I love every single word of it. You just made me cry.

XoXo
Emmy

I loved this, its a really great adaption of the video.

one word.... AMAZING

You guys don't know how happy those comments ('amazing' and 'you made me cry' pretty much sum them all up) make me. This is the first MCR fanfic and first story I posted on Mibba, so I'm glad you all like it so much. Thank you. :D

awww man that was awsome i love the way brothers there so cool
but that storys was just wicked i loved it!!
i felt like cryin....

Jeez!!
That is so sad!
im nearly crying
thats amazing!
xxxx

I have never read anything like that. Ever. That was the most amazing thing I've ever read on here. Wow. I'm actually stunned. And crying.
:]
amazing.
xxx

I'd like to know whom you read. You have a vocabulary beyond your years, and I'm wondering if that line about "the wasteland" is a T.S. Eliot reference (if so, then I beg to follow with, "the burial of the dead. April is the cruelest month" ). I just barely skimmed this time around, because it's very late and I'm very tired, but I'll come back tomorrow.

That was so sad! But I loved it. :D

Wow.
That was beautifully written.
It made me all teary eyed.
You could feel the emotion in your story.

wow that was amazing!
i loved your detail and how you put in the past and their promise, you built up a really good image.
good job, that was heartbreaking!!

wow.

that. was. amazing.

Wow. If I wasn't sitting in a room full of strangers I would have cried my eyes out. One word. AMAZING

oh my fucking god
(sorry, it may seem rude me swearing, but there is no other way to describe the brilliance of it)
you are such a good writer,
that made me cry

Oh my god. This was really good. It made me cry. =(