Cold As You - Comments

yess! I love stories like these! where's it's not all happy romance and derpy love all the time it's amazing! haha well basically I really fancy this story so far(:

I really like this so far! The only comment I have is that maybe you could break up the paragraphs a little more or even start each paragraph with an indentation. I found it a bit difficult to read at times. Anyways, I really like the story line and I'm excited to see where the characters are taken in this :))