Hatred: Slavery's Inevitable Aftermath - Comments

Haha, it's fine. :p But thank you sooo much! :) I've been trying to find time to add to this, but it's difficult to find when I've got work and college almost every day. :(

sorry about all the typos, this keyboard is rather annoying *sighs*

So, I myself am writing a story based on Ancient Rome and the Old Republic, so I made a little search to see what everyone else is writing about this subject and that's how I found your story. I am now immensely jealous of your writing style, the vocabulary you use and the way everuthing flows so beautofully. This is great work and you shouldn't let the lack of feedback stop you from writing more. This is mostly a teeny website where people go for fanfiction about their idols, not a lot of people here enjoy glorious work outside their comfort zone, I guess that's why most great stories don't really get a lot of attention... but please keep writing, you have got real talent.