Wild and Running - Comments

I really like the story I don't see many good fantasy fic anymore about bands I hope you keep updating.

Can't wait for an update! Great story!

I really like this story! It's great and I love how cuddly and cute Andy and Hannah are! I hope you get over your writer's block soon! I really hope you update soon as well! I can't wait to read more! Keep writing love! <3

I flipped shit when i saw my name in ur authors note holy shit im lame lol i had about a five minute freak out o screaming omg im in her authors note lol

I can't wait for the next update

Keep writing its great update soon

I literally can't wait till the next update.

cant wait for next update its going really well. i like it.

Update= super amazing awesomeness!!! :)

this is awesome! don't let negative comments get ya down you need to update this brilliant story you are writing!

Ahhh, this story is amazing :D
I can't wait to read more once you update it <3

Okay, first off one of my pet hates is a black background with nothing more than white writing on it. It’s really hard on the eyes. You need a header/banner on the top of your story and some neutral colours with your layout.

Another thing that I don’t like is how big your writing is. With the font that you’re using I don’t think that your writing should be any bigger than 110px because I had to reduce my screen about 40% to get it to a size that I could read. Also it should be spread so far across the page. People don’t want to move their eyes so far and by the time they get to the next sentence, they are going to lose where they are.

Also, after reading the first paragraph I can see straight away that your story needs proper paragraphs. This means double spaced between each and also double space every time someone speaks. This is also one of Mibbas regulations for all stories.

I like the idea of your story but you need more descriptions in it. Your aim is to try as hard as you can to connect with the readers and you can do that by expressing the characters feelings more and because you are writing in first person, you should tell the readers what she is seeing.

Like I said before, I like the idea of your story, but personally I wouldn’t read it. Not because it is bad but because I feel like there are way too many band-fics and I feel like people are losing their individuality.

Sorry, hit sumbit before I was done.

I'm not a huge fan of Black Veil Brides but I recognise a lot of the bands you mentioned, though I think it would be better to take it a little slower and introduce the different bands more gradually. Right now it feels like you're just in a rush to name drop and put 'oh, look at all the cool bands she knows' and make it so everyone isn't immeaditly super friendly with everyone. But that's just my opinion for this, I'm sure there are plenty of people who enjoy it this way. You should write what you enjoy.

Sorry, hit sumbit before I was done.

I'm not a huge fan of Black Veil Brides but I recognise a lot of the bands you mentioned, though I think it would be better to take it a little slower and introduce the different bands more gradually. Right now it feels like you're just in a rush to name drop and put 'oh, look at all the cool bands she knows' and make it so everyone isn't immeaditly super friendly with everyone. But that's just my opinion for this, I'm sure there are plenty of people who enjoy it this way. You should write what you enjoy.

First off, I'm not a huge fan of the layout. The font is so big it kind of hurts my eyes. I'd also suggest double spacing the paragraphs to keep in with Mibba rules and guidelines and just to make it easier to read.

As for the storyline, I'm not a huge fan of B

This story is really good. I enjoyed reading it. Love how you have written it and everything is combined. Glad comment swap brought me to I love it a lot. Please keep it up, and continue the amazing writing that you are doing! Subscribed and recommending.

From what i've read from your story; I can see your on the right track to write a great story. One, thing I would say though is initially I was put off due the layout. I feel the text is too big and over powering. The white? on black makes it kind of hard to read. I could the odd spelling and grammar error i.e. missing words. That can easily be rectified by re-reading or getting someone to proofread it for you :) continue the great work!

ahhhh update soon!! :DD

So...When did she find out what she was?? What chapter cause I counldn't find it and now I'm sort of confused!!

So awesome!! :-D