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  • animrod

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    That was beautiful.
    He stops playing completely. Silence fills the room as she falls.

    That line just made me think, and I analyzed the story, building a background in my own mind. The grammar was perfect.

    It was very powerful for a drabble.
    April 1st, 2008 at 03:12am
  • MusicSavedMyLife

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    wow
    I can understand that completely
    so cool!!
    March 28th, 2008 at 11:05pm
  • suddenxsilence

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    mmm i adore your works
    March 28th, 2008 at 01:29am
  • oxford comma.

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    That was beautiful, really and truly.
    My favorite lines:

    He moves his eyes away from the page for just one second to look at her and he misses a note.

    Trying to regain balance as he tries to regain his rhythm.
    March 27th, 2008 at 06:47pm
  • calling all creeps.

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    It was so entrancing.
    I'm not sure it that's a word, but that's how it made me feel.
    March 27th, 2008 at 06:19pm
  • gaskarth

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    This flowed right from my fingertips and I love it.
    I hope you do to.
    March 27th, 2008 at 06:00pm
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