Graceful Tragedy - Comments

animrod (100)

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That was beautiful.
He stops playing completely. Silence fills the room as she falls.

That line just made me think, and I analyzed the story, building a background in my own mind. The grammar was perfect.

It was very powerful for a drabble.

April 1st, 2008 at 03:12am

MusicSavedMyLife (100)

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wow
I can understand that completely
so cool!!

March 28th, 2008 at 11:05pm

suddenxsilence (100)

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mmm i adore your works

March 28th, 2008 at 01:29am

oxford comma. (200)

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That was beautiful, really and truly.
My favorite lines:

He moves his eyes away from the page for just one second to look at her and he misses a note.

Trying to regain balance as he tries to regain his rhythm.

March 27th, 2008 at 06:47pm

calling all creeps. (105)

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It was so entrancing.
I'm not sure it that's a word, but that's how it made me feel.

March 27th, 2008 at 06:19pm

gaskarth (150)

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This flowed right from my fingertips and I love it.
I hope you do to.

March 27th, 2008 at 06:00pm